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The Mirror |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Let your true self be your Mirror,Learn to validate your soul A reflection that brightens with new meaning Is such beauty to behold You may speak into this mirror Every word is taken in While listened to respectfully Without judgement, you will win Your mirror sees no color Its not tainted nor unkind This mirror of true sentiments Is the rarest one to find Be grateful for this mirror Its here you may confide Let go of all uncertainties Release whats held inside Its not purchased with our money Its not hanging on our wall Its a mirror of our true self And the greatest gift for all |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
When I read this poem it didn't seem dark at all, but thinking about it... the idea of looking into a mirror and seeing one's true self is darker than you might believe.... Anyway, i liked it  "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
I really enjoyed this poem, I look at myself all the time through my mirror, its the only way I can better myself. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i enjoyed the read very much so please keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice poem, Deborah. But my mirror is not my friend...It insists on telling me horrifying lies. Catalinamoon |
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tearsinheaven Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 18 |
this was a really great poem, but i agree with catalinamoon. My mirror is not my r=friend either. I tells me all of my faults and mistakes. but the poem was very well written, good job |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I loved this one!! Voting here!!  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Mirror Mirror on the.......ooops floor.. Nice new words on a subject tried and true. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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