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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-06-28 01:02 PM


I feel a magnetism
pulling me to you.
It's a force
out of my control.
I have to come-I will.
The choice is quickly becoming
a demand.
I'm being pulled
with increasing strength.
If I fight it much longer
it may break me in two.
And still, both parts
would have to come.
I have to be there.
Throw me that iron pole,
will you?
It will make the trip
that much quicker.
One more little tug
and I'm there....


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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-28 01:06 PM


~It's force is strong sometimes isn't it?  This poem is brief but packed.  Emotionally packed.  Great work. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace.
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-29 12:24 PM


i agree to this is packed. but i like the idea that its packed with your own expression on the subject. how you say you   give it a uncommon up lift. great work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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