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naynay
Junior Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 13
whitewright tx usa

0 posted 2000-06-28 09:05 AM


                     When I Am Gone !!

When I am gone relase me and let me go
I have so many things to see and so
You must'nt lie to your self to me
With tears b happy we had so many
Beautiful years

I give to you my love you can only
Guess how much you gave to me in
Happiness I thank you for the
Love you each have shown but now
It's time I travel on - Alone

So greave for me while if you must
Then let your heart be comforted
By trust it's only for a while that
We must part so bless the memories
Within your heart

I wont be far a way for life gose
On so if you need me call and I will
Come though you can not see me nor touch
Me I will be near and if you listen
Within your heart you will

Hear all my love around you soft and
Clear and then when you must come this
Way alone I will great you with a smile
And say WELCOME HOME

                                 BY candy williams
note   their's a story behind this poem and if you would like to know it u can look for my poem in Critical Analynsis or u can e-mail me if u like  




[This message has been edited by naynay (edited 06-28-2000).]

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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-29 01:08 AM


great poem i love it and this seem how i felt when the love of my life died. so thank for bringging back the memories.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


naynay
Junior Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 13
whitewright tx usa
2 posted 2000-06-29 02:56 AM


To all who read this poem it is not ment to hurt you in anyway so please do not feel like it was I had Jst wonted to let others know how I felt when someone close had passed on.



[This message has been edited by naynay (edited 06-29-2000).]

DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
3 posted 2000-06-29 03:11 AM


beautiful... death is a very hard thing to deal with but its a part of life we all must accept... hopefully something better awaits us all.  


-if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.-

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