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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-06-28 07:32 AM

Here is my nightly exercise in frustration.

Oh, man of illusion,
I've had only a taste of you.
It's just not enough.
I want some more.

Such words of passion,
I feel them surround me.
So strong, almost touching.
I want some more.

You've become my addiction,
now I need a fix.
Those few drops are
great, but
I want some more.

You hint of a pleasure
too great to bear.
Stop hinting and deliver-
I want some more...

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

1 posted 2000-06-28 07:42 AM

Great expression of that place, that need, and how the wanting can consume our being. I loved it!!..And wish you More of everything you need...soon

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-06-28 07:48 AM

Thanks Deb. And a note to everyone-my very stupid webtv posted this poem twice, in the process of bumping me on and off. Please ignore the extra one.
ANYONE have a computer for sale cheap? LOL

LarBear
Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 138
Kingston, New York

3 posted 2000-06-28 09:32 AM

catalinamoon,

Ahh, I do like this one, darlin`.
This one clearly shows the pain and agony of our feelings reaching out for More.
I have too tell you, I think most of us have been there.

Great Poem,

Love makes the world smile

LarBear

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

4 posted 2000-06-28 11:24 AM

A terrible but wonderful feeling, I can *feel* your desire! very impressive!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-06-29 12:14 PM

love the expression and i hope you get what you want. keep them coming and i would like to know if you got what you wanted. LOL maybe in a #2

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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