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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2000-06-28 03:56 AM


      
        Touch not the cat
        Tis a warning fairly given
        The wounds she inflicts
        Cut straight to the heart

        Touch not the cat
        Hunter heed this advice
        She cares not who she bites
        In her own hunger and her pain

        Touch not the cat
        Your heart you will hold forfeit
        And will all be for naught
        In the endless hours before dawn

        Touch not the cat
        You will spend forever regretting
        The sacrifice you made to her pain
        For you cannot touch her soul
        

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Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-06-28 07:48 AM


I was feeling and thinking of a place..to heed warning, your piece spoke to me, as we all can relate in our own way, Good work!!!
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-29 01:11 AM


yes i do love your work. i hope that this person takes the warnings or i'll be there taking his soul. LOL. enjoyed the read thanks.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2000-06-30 12:12 PM


JJ......thanks that means a lot to me
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