navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #2 » A Chant
Dark Poetry #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic A Chant Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA

0 posted 2000-06-28 03:00 AM


Come, my lost, little children,
I'll take thee away,
into a world of magick and enchantment.
Come, little souls,
I want thee to play,
deep within my garden of magick.

Follow me close,
don't get left behind,
within my small haven 'tis peace.
Follow close,
for all thee shall find,
is a lifetime of wonder and bliss.

© Copyright 2000 Lisa Marie - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-06-28 08:15 AM


What a wonderful place to visit, for any age, nicely spoken, a soft place to fall, I liked it alot!!!
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-06-28 11:27 AM


I like the nursery-rhyme style of this. And especially the fact that we don't know if the promises are real ...

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-29 12:17 PM


can i come and play cause i'm still a big kid. can i can i please please. great writing and expression hope to read more of you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #2 » A Chant

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary