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Jeremiah Johnson
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  I was born to this
       World
And one day will be
       erased
   So is this that
       Great
       Thing
     They call
       Fate?

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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lotharingia
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Hmmm, that's one way of putting it, I guess. But don't forget about all the things that happen inbetween  
great poem, as usual!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Deborah1
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I can't tell you how many times I have asked that question, but never in that form, that was very very good!!
kynder
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yes is it, or is it the destiny you are making for yourself??  aaaaaaahhhhhhhh the never ending loop, where do i get off at??  great great inward piece here, jaybean.  lovin it like i love you!!!! yaaaaa hoooooo!!!!!

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman
LarBear
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4 posted 06-28-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for LarBear   Email LarBear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LarBear

Jeremiah,

Very simply put.
I agree, but dont leave yourself to this fate. Live life, for fate is more than the end, maybe, just maybe, it is the begining.

Love makes the world smile

LarBear  
Lone Wolf
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Jeremiah,

Fate is just the road that takes us there my friend.  We choose the path and fate plots the course accordingly.  Great piece.  

LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth
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Fate is kind of annoying sometimes, because we don't know what it has in store, and it seems to change all the time. Just when we think we know what's going on, poof, it's different. Nice poem.

Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia


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