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In the Moment |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
As dawn breaks the rush begins.so many things, so many thoughts..I have lost the moment Where to start, looking ahead, planning, today, tomorrow, next week, I have lost the moment Remembering when..wondering how..too many demands, I have lost the moment Life is on fast forward, I run to keep up, stumbling by, missing the mark, and endless circle I must stop, slowly walk, look around, not too far ahead, or too far back, I must feel the moment, I must live in the moment, or I will have lost the moment.. A small but precious time...time to live in the moment |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sadness ending in courage. Well done. Indeed, we must always live for the moment, live for today. For unbeknownst to us tomorrow may never come and our last day on Earth may well be wasted. It is important to stop, smell, feel, appreciate nature and Earth and all in between. Wise, encouraging words.. well done  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes great point live life to the fullest. don't live by your mistakes learn from them great work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- ideas flow through my mind and ink through my viens. so |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
so true, Deb, but what do you do when the moment is so miserable, and you can only look ahead in order to keep going on? |
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tearsinheaven Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 18 |
I am always worrying about the future and how to prepare for it, but this poem made me realize that i should let the future happen in the future and i should live in the preasent. good poem! |
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