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Does Anyone Care |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
I'm tired of taking up space I'm hurting behind this unsure face Does anyone Care? I could go, if I left, disappeared Does anyone Care? What if I just faded away I'm doing that now, in a crowd of dispare I'm neally gone to that place somewhere I can't here you calling are you aware? lost now, gone now, remember me with my long brown hair.... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Get back here! Ya you with the long brown hair! Excellent poem! Hi there! I care! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
We do care hon, sending you cyber hugs.. *hugs* Here in our passions family all you have to do is reach out and someone will be there. Just hope you are merely exercising possibilities and not thinking of doing anything stupid. Take care  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, yes, someone cares. We all do. Beautiful and sad poem, but I hope you are not as sad as it sounds. catalinamoon |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i care we all care here about you so please don't sat no one doe's and i hope that you feel better real soon. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LIL,...I care. Know that please. This poem cries tears that reach my heart. If you need or like,...please write. Take care of you. *Peace. |
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tearsinheaven Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 18 |
If this is really how you feel, i know the feeling. I know how it feels to think no one cares, but i realized (almost too late) that there are a lot of people who accually do care. i hope you stick around to write some more! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
maybe that one jerk, anyone, doesn't care, but that one great person, someone, does. ya follow??????? i used to have long brown naturally curly hair. but anyone cut it off. oh well, someone will like it short!!!!!!!!! see what i mean!!???? love ya, lucky!! btw, excellent message. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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