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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-06-27 03:46 PM


Venting is good, and this is a good vent. But NOT in this forum. Using an asterisk to replace a letter or two doesn't make profanity any less profane.

Please, people! We need your help to keep Passions a family site!

Ron

[This message has been edited by rcarnell (edited 06-27-2000).]

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Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-06-27 04:18 PM


DkW...you are here because we need you....all of us here in Dark Passions.  We need your words, your thoughts, your love....all of which you have so willingly shared.  Venting is good....Hardrock
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-06-27 05:04 PM


Well thank ya, Hardrock.  But life seems to take control at times.  

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


FJiznit
Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24

3 posted 2000-06-27 06:24 PM


Hey!  Lucky I got to read it before the censor intervention.  I wanted to say.  This is the kind of writing that makes me feel like a fake.  Makes me question if I actually feel anything contained in my own writing.  Powerful stuff.  In this case I reckon the profanity gave weight to the impact.  Wow.
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
4 posted 2000-06-27 06:40 PM


OOps got in trouble for this one eh? Sorry Ron  

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
5 posted 2000-06-27 06:42 PM


Profanity is a social taboo with no real meaning. I can say (write, in this case) something much more terrible without using any so called profane words.  All of you know that what i say is true.  But, its my respect for this site that bars me from using it in my works, even though i have been tempted...Isn't there an adult section anyway?
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-06-27 07:23 PM


The Adult forum is more for male/female writings to put it nicely! LOL
We really don't need to use profanity or **** asterisks instead of to get our point across, we have so many other words at our disposal!!!
Isis

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
7 posted 2000-06-28 12:23 PM


it seems i get my point across without useing them so i challenge all who use them not to but still get your point across.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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