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Allstaria22
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2000-06-27 02:13 PM

I killed her today
with my hands
covered with blood
as I looked at all
she had made me
of everything she had taken
I'm glad she's gone
I shall not mourn
she was no good
she broke my heart
she took my life
with all her lies
she took you away from me
with her stupid thoughts
of a perfect love
that doesn't exist
that will never be hers
or mine
it is never to be
that we shall feel
the lover's touch
upon our flesh
makeing us feel
everything
we've ever wanted
everything I've ever needed
I'll never get to now
I killed her
I killed me
she will not be missed
no one knew her
but me
and I am gone now too.

[This message has been edited by Allstaria22 (edited 06-27-2000).]

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2000-06-27 02:54 PM

"....no one knew her but me, I killed her, I killed me" Sometimes you have to do that, figuratively speaking of course....kill off what we can no longer tolerate, so new life can emerge. Hope you find that love that gives you new life. Powerful poem....Hardrock

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

2 posted 2000-06-27 03:35 PM

I think we truly can put closure to things (with thoughts) somehow we all have many ideas to help us put an end to painful memories, I hope true Love finds you, I agree with Hardrock, very powerful Deborah 1

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

3 posted 2000-06-27 03:41 PM

Powerful indeed......I like this very much and the way the your imagery jumps out of the words!

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-06-27 11:36 PM

this is a great poem and yes sometimes we have to do these things to start over. enjoyed the read and keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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