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Hardrock
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since 02-14-2000
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0 posted 06-27-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Hardrock

(I had to edit this so it was better understood)  

Friendship Rejected
She said to me:

"I donít need a friend, I need marriage,
I want a lover, companion, and more.
But all you offer is friendship,
And Iím tired of playing the whore.

Youíre really not marriage material,
Youíve nothing to offer I need.
So just go away and leave me alone,
And quit sending me poems I donít read.

What makes you think I would want you?
For you Iím just wasting my time.
I need to be finding a lover,
Not reading your damn silly rhyme.

So take your crap back to Dark Passions,
And write about "skies of blue",
Iím a woman on a mission to find true love,
And that mission doesnít include you."

Marv Hardin  06/27/00



[This message has been edited by Hardrock (edited 06-27-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Marv Hardin - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
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since 03-21-2000
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1 posted 06-27-2000 01:47 PM       View Profile for Dark_kisses_Within   Email Dark_kisses_Within   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark_kisses_Within's Home Page   View IP for Dark_kisses_Within

WOW!!!!  Now this was a very poetic "kiss off!!"    Very nice pattern tho!

Peace


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

kynder
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since 04-11-2000
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2 posted 06-27-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

i sit here unable to think of words to respond to these so raw written by you.  very good work.  i feel kinda dumb.

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman
Dark_kisses_Within
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Kansas


3 posted 06-27-2000 01:58 PM       View Profile for Dark_kisses_Within   Email Dark_kisses_Within   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark_kisses_Within's Home Page   View IP for Dark_kisses_Within

Hey Hardrock?????? Do tell the story on this one......I am curious!  




Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

Hardrock
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New Hampshire, USA


4 posted 06-27-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

DkW...It's part of a puzzle.  Go read Your Hearts War....it starts to make some sense then.  Thanks....(I just love your name...keep repeating it to myself as I fall asleep at night)  Hardrock
Dark_kisses_Within
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5 posted 06-27-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Dark_kisses_Within   Email Dark_kisses_Within   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark_kisses_Within's Home Page   View IP for Dark_kisses_Within

My name? Why my name??

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

MagnoliaBlue
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6 posted 06-27-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

WOW!
If I read this
' kiss-off'
correctly, you
just pushed aside
a ' friend'.  

You are looking for a
lover, companion and
marriage. Wise and
wonderful people have
found out that their mate
is their 'best friend'!  

It is wonderful to be
friends first and have
it develope into just
the most precious
relationship.

Sorry for my 2-cents
worth...but friendship
is vital in any type
of relationship.

So I will just say...
'Scuse me please and sign off...
Good luck on your hunt,Hardrock.  

MagnoliaBlue
Hardrock
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7 posted 06-27-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

To MagnoliaBlue....just to clarify, I wasn't sending this...this was the message I received.  I would never kiss-off anybody....but thanks for your comments. At least it made you think.  Hardrock

To DkW...your name is like a mantra:  Dark Kisses Within, Dark Kisses Within, Dark Kisses Within.....It's a uniquely beautiful name, phonetically pleasing to say, and it evoke images of beauty, sensuality and passion.  It beats the h*** out of repeating "Ohmmmmmm, Ohmmmmmmm, Ohmmmmmm" a hundred times.  Do I have to pay royalties on using it now.....LOL?   Hardrock
Dark_kisses_Within
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8 posted 06-27-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for Dark_kisses_Within   Email Dark_kisses_Within   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark_kisses_Within's Home Page   View IP for Dark_kisses_Within

Hmmmmm alrightyyyyyy then Hardrock I got ur point of view about my name!! LOL  And yes please send the payments to www.brokeasHell.com   LOL

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

catalinamoon
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9 posted 06-27-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Hardrock, all I can say is ..stupid girl...If I had ever had a man writing beautiful poems to me, he would still be here with me. I'm sorry you were hurt so much.
Catalinamoon
Hardrock
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10 posted 06-27-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

Catalina....you misunderstand...She's not a stupid girl..quite the contrary, she's someone who knows what she wants and needs.  I was the one who got in her way along her journey....I presumed too much, assumed too much.  I have this urge sometimes to rush in, prop up and try to be "the Saviour" (another great poem here in Dark Passions I might add).  So....it was my own doing.  
As for the hurt.....there is no hurting the Hardrock.  "I have my books, my poetry to protect me.....I'm shielded in my lonely room.  I touch no one, and no one touches me.  I am a rock.  I am an island.  And a rock feels no pain....and an island never crys."  (Simon and Garfunkle)  Thanks for all your concern....(secret just for your eyes: You are one of my favorites)  Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
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11 posted 06-28-2000 12:31 AM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

hardrock i see your point. i to sometimes seem to mess things up like right now i'm prepareing to move to south carolina over this summer and leave my girl behind its not the most stuipedest of my mistakes but its one of them and my parents to. but its something i feel i have to do to better my life for me.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Hardrock
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12 posted 06-28-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

Ironic isn't it Jeremiah....you are moving to South Carolina...and I'm already here?  See how things work in life?  Hardrock
Paula Finn
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13 posted 06-28-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

a woman on a mission can be deadly...but you act like its all your fault...no way Hardrock...we can be cruel and foolish creatures
ThUnDeRkYsS
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14 posted 06-29-2000 04:00 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Excellent poem.  I know how this feels, they are the only ones missing out in this situation my friend... not you.  If they are not happy starting with a solid friendship, they will not be so forthcoming with a solid friendship during a relationship I find.  Dont give up, great job.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.


lotharingia
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since 06-04-2000
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15 posted 06-29-2000 05:08 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

I think this is really sad, as unrequited love always is. A great poem! BTW, I'm not sure I believe you can't be hurt.  

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Deborah1
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16 posted 06-29-2000 07:18 AM       View Profile for Deborah1   Email Deborah1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah1

Oh Hardrock, I felt so sad! I loved the poetry, but I hate so know of someone rejecting love?? I think poetry is romantic, so don't ever stop!!!
Rex
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17 posted 06-30-2000 12:50 PM       View Profile for Rex   Email Rex   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex's Home Page   View IP for Rex

Hey Marv! Great work!!! I know the feeling all too well.
Debbie Lindsey
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18 posted 02-20-2002 10:33 PM       View Profile for Debbie Lindsey   Email Debbie Lindsey   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Debbie Lindsey

My dear sweet Marvin...That poem rings all too familiar to me.  
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