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Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire

0 posted 2000-06-27 12:04 PM




Welcome to my Garden, you may enter free, this creation of beauty where promise will grow

Gaze upon the colors,breathe in the purity, and smell the intoxicating freedom of love

There are lillies of orange the flame of desire, next to red roses of passion, glistening with the mornings dew..

Choose your desire, plant your thoughts and watch your wishes emerge from a seed, hold nothing back

A Garden of your creation is also free

© Copyright 2000 Deborah Murphy - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-06-27 01:47 PM


I walked through your garden in silence,
Stole a fallen petal to remind me of you,
And left silently.....remembering the beauty.  Excellent imagery here, Deb.  Really enjoyed it.  Hardrock

a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

2 posted 2000-06-27 03:47 PM


Such lovely gardens we all create.....if only they could truly be....
Lovely!


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-27 11:22 PM


the beauty you create here is so great i just love it so please keep them coming i hope to read more of you very very soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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