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LarBear
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York

0 posted 2000-06-27 08:16 AM


Our Footprints

Our footprints walk together
side by side
Hand in hand
Heart to heart
Feelings of love
Feelings of passion
Our footprints need no asking

These prints do not follow
They walk together
Slowly one by one
Slowly step by step
From far to near
From one to a hundred
Our footprints are not too many

These prints walk forward
Parallel and in motion
Ocean waves cover them
Ocean breezeā€™s blend them
In unison they will go
In tandem they will fade
Our Footprints somehow remain

Still together these prints travel
Making paths, they sway
Holding on, hand in hand
Holding memories a lifetime
As hands, soon loosen
As fingers gently slide free
Our footprints will drift apart

Not knowing where they go
These prints may walk free
Around obstacles they roam
Alone, a single print travels
Some might find the other
Some could stray away
Our footprints will find each other
Our footprints will walk together


Well, What do you think?

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Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-06-27 08:40 AM


Your poem had alot of different meanings for me, I loved it. It made me think of differnt times in my life, and where my footprints may lead...


Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-06-27 08:54 AM


these footprints lead you almost anywhich way you would like to go with it.
enjoyed

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-06-27 03:28 PM


Did you ever notice that footprints only mark where you have been.....never where you will go?  Excellent Larry....Do some more.   Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-06-28 12:15 PM


yes yes truely great work and please do keep it up. would love to read more.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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