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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
My fragmented heart sears on frenzied pyre My scattered passion drifts in stinging smoke My crumbled feelings waste in cooling ashes Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lets see.. a broken heart,,loss of passion,, hurt feelings,,,, sounds like someone did something very hurtful. poignant phrasing Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Only six lines....and yet, so much said. Great stuff....shows a rare talent. Hardrock |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
I was just about to go looking for you and here you are posting. It's about time!!! *grin* Welcome back. Can you tell you were missed? What a great poem to come sailing back in on. I've been here. Too many loves, not enough time and only one heart. Absolutely wonderful. |
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E. Benjamin Roy Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 12 |
From the ashes we rise, and from them we fall...great work. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well you said it all in very few words. Impressive Catalinamoon |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
alot said in so few words a gift we both share. enjoyed this read very much and thanks for coming back to us. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Thank you, friends, for all your kind comments!  gothicmoth, I love you too! I was only gone for a week! Jeremiah, I was striving to reply to all of your poems, but there are so many new ones ... unbelievable what can happen in one week! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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