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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-27 02:57 AM


As i stand at these crossroads
           Again
I remember all my beloved friends
          Because
           Hate
       Took the bait
           And
      On my tombstone
        Enscribed
         Is the
          Date
        1-12-23


I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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fantasyhoneybabe
Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12

1 posted 2000-06-27 03:05 AM


OH MAN SORRY YOUR DEAD , BUT YOU CAN'T SAY THAT YOU DIDN'T TRY !!! NICE POEM FOR THE HATE VERSION !!!

FANTASYHONEYBABE
   27/6/00

LOVE YAH !!! PEACE !!!

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-06-27 03:33 AM


i love it when you branch out, taking that bait to form a new concept, you simply create!!  i love this, jaybean.  keep it up, bro!!

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-06-27 03:54 AM


Great death date!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
4 posted 2000-06-27 04:02 AM


Like the love version better
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