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DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA

0 posted 2000-06-27 01:09 AM


You draw your sword, and cut me down.
Then look upon me with hatred and a frown.
You cut me up, then threw me away,
I had a feeling today wouldn't be my day.
You have no remorce, feel no sorrow for me,
How could I have ever let this be?
How could I let you hurt me, and keep reality from my eyes?
Was it my love for you, or your hatered for me, that determined that I had to die?

© Copyright 2000 Lisa Marie - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-27 02:36 AM


i like most of all for its Mid Evil plot and play you speak of a time i can only wish to live within but the idea of death being cut down is so grand love your work and keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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