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LuckyinLove
Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57
Australia

0 posted 2000-06-27 12:59 PM


Did I think it would last forever
Yes I did, I'm not very clever
Delusional lover, just a game
crazy man, someone to tame

If I tried to see what made you tick
I would only find out your painfully thick

I hate you
I hate what you do
I never want to understand
what you are ugly man

You are so screwed up
selling fake ideals
You think your so cool
you can't live within the rule

Reinvent myself
who shall I be
Sexy, Shy or a Mystery



[This message has been edited by LuckyinLove (edited 06-28-2000).]

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DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
1 posted 2000-06-27 01:16 AM


beautiful...i love it!!!
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-06-27 01:29 AM


Whoaaaaaaa dont hold back so much next time!!    Great way to let it out!!


Peace


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-27 02:44 AM


wonderful expression loved it let it out and keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-06-27 03:39 AM


boy oh boy is this good!!!  yeahhhhh i like the angry ones today!!!!!!  excellent great wonderful raw powerful!!!!!  man i want to read this again......


kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

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