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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
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0 posted 2000-06-27 12:48 PM


There in my eyes lies the regret
and there in my heart lies the tears
But none of these they see,
my lingering pain shared only with me
I try to fight the fears choking me
I say to myself, "I'll be fine"
But as I watch her scream
and I see her fall
I become less sure of myself,
the fortress burning to the ground
And from here I must ignore
the bleeding of my soul,
Walking on into oblivian
even more insane than the day before
Fighting for my way back,
out of this endless maze
I've silenced myself
of forbidden rain,
Knowing here and now
nothing will ever be the same
A smile from me and a wish of happiness
are all you're going to see of me
as I return to my home
of blood and beautiful myst
living as spirits, my friends...

my precious darkness
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Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~

"So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler

*+The Sadist Queen+*





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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-27 02:30 AM


great poem i feel so loud and clear. keep up the good work. and i have missed reading your words.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 2000-06-27 04:04 AM


Really? I've been missed? That's a definate shocker...thanks for the thought aswell as the reply.   < !signature-->

Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~

"So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler

*+The Sadist Queen+*



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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-06-27 04:08 AM


I am struck by the passages..
"there in my eyes", and "there in my heart",,
as opposed to "here in my"...
very nice poem

Broken
Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
4 posted 2000-06-29 03:44 PM


Like you I'm not here as much as I used to, but I try to check in sometimes to see if there's any posts from you.
****
But as I watch her scream
and I see her fall
I become less sure of myself,
the fortress burning to the ground
****
Loved those lines, you're "her" right? Reminds me of a Cure song, fan maybe?
And thanks for the kind words in your reply to my last poem, I'm just fine I guess, hope you're fine to, wouldn't want to lose you eighter you know, I kinda like you my friend   Take care you
~Broken~


De profundis clamo ad te Domine!



Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 2000-06-29 03:49 PM


Ahhh my precious darkness...and my precious Dark Enchantress....something for everyone here.  Enjoyed it.  Hardrock
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
6 posted 2000-06-29 04:27 PM


Prometheus, Broken, and Hardrock -
   Thank you all very, very much for replying to poem.    

Broken - I've just been kind of trying find some stability within myself lately so I haven't been here much. But I already feel much better compared to last night so I'll be back more often when I get back from Arizona. (which will be on the 8th of July)No, not a Cure fan...actually I've never heard them before. Are they any good? I'm glad to hear that you're doing better....and don't worry about me...I'm a survivor...I'll be fine.     Well thanks for replying to my poem...I was hoping to hear from you again before I left. And you better not go anywhere either...I like you too.     Take care my friend.

                          Love,
                          Angel
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Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~





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