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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-06-27 12:47 PM

The taste of your lips
The smell of your hair
The touch of your hands
On my back so bare

The sound of your voice
The warmth in the air
The smile on my face
Knowing that you care

The way you hold me
Late each night
Telling me you love me
With each ray of light

Slowly I open my eyes
And all that i see
Is the emptiness
Laying beside me

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

1 posted 2000-06-27 01:18 AM

how i wish this could be my reality...but i know, deep down, it could only be a dream.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-06-27 02:38 AM

well i'm sorry to say i can't relate cause i mostly live in my own little dream world that mine to control. but its still a great poem and i love it.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2000-07-24 10:10 AM

Oh how beautifully sad!! Nice!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

LarBear
Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 138
Kingston, New York

4 posted 2000-07-24 10:48 AM

Oh darlin`,

I do know exactly how you feel.
great expressions.

LarBear

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

5 posted 2000-07-24 11:09 AM

DkW...I wonder how many of us wake up every morning with the same thought...even when the bed isn't empty. Nicely said. You sure know how to say it. Hardrock

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

6 posted 2000-07-24 12:11 PM

Hardrock's response was how I was thinking of replying...I thank him for speaking my "voice"

~~smiles
Maureen

Click
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 202
USA

7 posted 2000-07-24 08:43 PM

I get it, I feel it, I know it!!
Good write!!
Thank you.

Click

thebeautybrat
Member

since 2000-03-30

Posts 114
Florida

8 posted 2000-07-24 11:14 PM

i often find myself dreaming of such a thing very often! i wish so much that it could be reality...but really the reality of it is that you want such a love that most of us couldn't have! very nicely written!!

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