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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-06-26 11:53 PM

Tonight
I choose to immerse myself
in you.
I re-read your letters, gaze at your art,
hold your photo close to me,
and write one more poem dedicated to you.
I dwell, obsess, fantasize, plan, plot, yearn,
practically hallucinate,
I am so enveloped
in you.
Tonight,
I choose to forget
everything else,
let the barriers fade away,
and just immerse myself
in the joy
of knowing you.

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

1 posted 2000-06-27 12:01 PM

wow, this is so raw for me. so vivid the image you create. i wish i had the strength to reminisce positively!! i really enjoyed this, i can see you there just enjoying the moment. excellent work!!

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

Portia
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 157

2 posted 2000-06-27 01:02 AM

This is fantastic. I love this, I love how it feels, I love how it reads, I have felt this, and continue to feel it.

"I dwell, obsess, fantasize, plan, plot, yearn,
practically hallucinate..."

I loved it. The perfect picture of obsessive love. Thank you.

LuckyinLove
Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 57
Australia

3 posted 2000-06-27 01:10 AM

Its great how your words are showing that your just kicken back and enjoying the memories, just for you.

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

4 posted 2000-06-27 01:22 AM

how many times have i done this???...to many to count. your poetry brings up emotions i wish would go away, but never-the-less it's beautiful. your gift is inspiring

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-06-27 02:40 AM

i can just see you there. i really enjoyed the read and can't wait to read more of you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

6 posted 2000-06-27 04:03 AM

Wow. This is so real. And moreover so positive. I loved this!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

7 posted 2000-06-27 11:30 AM

I could honestly feel that moment, I know that feeling..WOW, unbelievable, it brought to me a sense of things I thought I had forgotten about? Thank you for such nice work!!! Deborah1

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

8 posted 2000-06-27 02:15 PM

Such a Kodak moment in these words....you just keep getting better and better. I have re-read this several times....and that is unusual for me. Love it.....Hardrock

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