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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-06-26 08:01 PM


As I speak to you
And hear the pain and consern in your voice
I relize that you are treating every secound
As if it is your last

Like you life is ending
I know your sick and worried for your life
But you are going to live on

I am not ready to loose you yet
I need you by my side
I just got use to you
You have to say a little longer

No matter what I am not giving you up
Without a fight
But you have to be strong as well
It is your life to
I can't do it for you
So you have to try

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
1 posted 2000-06-26 08:05 PM


Very sad poem!!!
My heart aches for you both
great Job!!!!
Blue

DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
2 posted 2000-06-27 01:41 AM


i hope whatever is wrong makes its self right...your poem is so full of emotion, so truthful, and so beautiful
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-27 01:54 AM


this is so very sad but a great poem. i hope everything works out for you my friend real soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
4 posted 2000-06-27 02:19 PM


Thank you everyone I am glad you liked it. My dad is in the hospital so that who kenny is.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 2000-06-27 03:03 PM


Neala...we never really lose anyone...it's just that sometimes we can't be where they are.  Your Dad should be so proud of you.....I am.       Hardrock
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-06-27 04:27 PM


Wonderful sentiments...and I hope for the best for you and your Dad....James
Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
7 posted 2000-06-29 06:08 PM


Hey Thanks I am glad you liked the poem. It is nice to know people care.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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