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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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a word.... i am pissed the hell off today. if you are a man, don't take it personal. Waste of Your Time I choose to keep my anger, My hate. Helps me stay hard to the wares, Snares of Love and its messenger--- Men. So this is where I shall stay. Angry even at my Creator above. For they are all too young, Too old, Already in love, Burned til cold. Try all you like, 'Til blue in the face. Nothing you say, and/or profess Will make me surrender this State of being, I confess. Rage has become my friend, you see. For by the spoon it was fed to me. With Love as the gravy, I became the biscuit. Left not one drop unconsumed. And now I bathe in it, It washes me mean. I emerge sparkling, With a blinding hate. A mad, almost insane gleam twinkling In my eyes. Never before have I turned so many Heads. So this is where I shall stay. In one ear and out the other, Preach on, my brother. I have heard it alllllllllllll A time or another. *****kynder < !signature--> Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman [This message has been edited by kynder (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
let that anger flow. You know there are some out there a small number who the give the rest of us a bad name. I hope that you will meet on the nice men out there. a great poem, loved the biscuit image, take care. And don't take any grief from him, hope you find an angel not a preacher. For by the spoon it was fed to me. With Love as the gravy, I became the biscuit. Left not one drop unconsumed. And now I bathe in it, It washes me mean. I emerge sparkling, With a blinding hate. A mad, almost insane gleam twinkling In my eyes. Never before have I turned so many Heads. "but for the lovers, their arms Round the griefs of the ages, Who pay no praise or wages Nor heed my craft or art" Dylan Thomas. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Yes, ok...we're evil. By my own admission, i have done some not so nice things for reason i dont understand. But i think we all do things for which we had no understandable reason. Or maybe i had a reason? Maybe he had a reason? ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Kynder YOu GO GIRL!!! Vent Vent Vent I liked this one too of course maybe I shouldn't have been delighted with it as I am But I know where you are coming from I dont think I would have been able to put anger on paper Wonderful Wonderful JOb!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Vent away hon... tis much better to get the emotional bile out now before it makes you sick or something! LOL I know those feelings well myself. Great work  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well I bet you have a real good reason to be mad. I too have heard it all a time or another. This was a great poem. I hope you feel better having let it out. Catalinamoon |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
hey Knyder wonderful poem but i'm asking you to email me and let me know what happened to make you feel this way. cause i'm here for you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Kyder, Great poem, and many of us have felt that way. Not only women, though. Somehow people always seem to get attracted to people who hurt them. But there ARE nice ones out there! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Men ha ha ha I love em! and I hate em! I had to grow up with 5 brothers, and no sisters, so men don't scare me I scare them.. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
"Burned till cold" I like this phrase!! Know it. Good poem! Anger is a powerful emotion also!! Thanx!!! Click |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Woooooooow! Kinder, it's amazing!!! I could have never ever said it better myself! I just read it in one breath... And what a great style!!! I can't even pick my favourite lines coz it's sooooo good all together! Except for in between "For they are all too young, Too old, Already in love, Burned til cold try all you like Til blue in the face..." You forgot - Married!!! AAAAAahhhhh! (But I guess it was covered by "already in love") GREAT, GREAT and once again - GREAT!!! Peace! Hope for you and me and all the female population of earth it will improve... |
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Maya the Brokenhearted Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 66 |
rage can be a healing thing keep screaming girl!  ~M |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Kynder, I think it's cool that this poem came back, you speak for all of us women at some time or another. (Many times, in my case.) catalinamoon |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
*APPLAUSE* you have just said the things alot of women keep on their mind but could never say out loud......you wear anger well! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Good gosh, gracious me Kynder!!! WoW. Spew away the hate gurl. I realize this is one from a while back (and hopefully you are feeling better) but what emotion in this. It bleeds. "It washes me mean.",...what a line. So many incredible lines. Superb work. Take care you. *Peace. |
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