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Dark Poetry #2

Suicidal Tendencies

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2000-06-26 01:11 PM

Tremors rock the inner core
Beneath the solid ground
Constand build up, pressures rise
As turmoil sturs around.
Suddenly there comes a sound
A shaking on the land
Damage has struck everywhere
The cost of life is grand.
It roars like tunder, souns its hate
Taking life away
The inner core has lost control
And rages far astray.
To release the inside stress
Of all life's constant pain
The outside core takes its toll
By striking outward veins.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-26 02:38 PM

~Whoa,...powerful and heavy this one. I think this can be applied to many different senarios....well done....sooo well done. Welcome here!!! Take care. *Peace.

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

2 posted 2000-06-26 05:33 PM

Powerful in its directness, but still ambigious enough to enjoy the mystery of dark passions (PUN!).

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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-27 01:38 AM

love your work and because i have not read any of it before this i must say welcome to the darkside. well keep them coming and i hope to read more of you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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