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FJiznit.......... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Death is not what I wait for Its the love of another soul Yet Death is my only visitor So I must pay my toll To long for the attention And the kisses each night To share the hopes and dreams Our future in our sight Yet Death says its time And that he does care He's looking into my eyes With such a solid stare Yet his voice is not truthful His hand is clamy and cold He tells me I want him His imagery is bold To take his hand Will not happen this day I shall wait for the next In a more loving way Time is all I have The pain I must bare Waiting in the shadows Till someone knows I care |
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FJiznit Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24 |
Like all your work, this is wonderful. It's a shame my name isn't as inspiring as yours. This interaction has been great. You've really inspired me to write again. Thank you. Does anyone have any suggestions for a more fitting name for myself? |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Well, a name is very powerful and personal, i can not tell you what you are like, only you know what truly dwells within. BTW: Powerful words Dark_kisses_Within... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
I agree the name you pick for urself must be YOU! Think about things you like to do or the places you see most. You shall think of a good one soon. As for ur writing...... it all comes from within dear!! And I am glad I helped push u back into writing. U r talented!!!!! Peace |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
it is the inspiration you give each other that is the true joy to witness. it matters not under what name you create, just that you have. dark kisses, you will say it so much better than I... will you do me a favor and tell fjiznit that for me??? this is great. keep waiting, my friend. follow your gut, for you find your heart at the end. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Yes Kynder I shall tell him for you! Peace  Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well great poem again from you loved it. and well my name is my name. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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