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fantasyhoneybabe
Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12


0 posted 2000-06-26 04:00 AM


The wind is fresh ,
The sun is bright ,
And all along ,
You're by my side .

Your lushes lips ,
Your sparkling teeth ,
The though of it ,
Just wanna make me sigh .

Walking on the beach ,
With kisses so sweet ,
And telling
How much i love you

Once again ,
Our love regain ,
On a somertime
Annual date !!!

                    fantasyhoneybabe
                        26/6/00


© Copyright 2000 fantasyhoneybabe - All Rights Reserved
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-06-26 06:22 AM


Ahh... how romantic! Welcome!    What a lovely "fresh" poem!
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-06-26 09:52 AM


God how I loved the summer loves, great job on this one kid.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-06-26 12:58 PM


Welcome to Dark Passions!!  And what a nice first post.  Its always nice to read about love and summer.  It takes some of the "darkness" away for a short time.
Keep up the good work my Friend.

Peace

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-06-26 01:02 PM


~Hey there,...Welcome!!!  This is a great light and airy piece of poetry,...it's refreshing to read. Great job. Take care. *Peace.
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
5 posted 2000-06-27 01:24 AM


as it goes welcome to the dark side. and i am your father. Just joking great first post and i hope to be reading more from you real soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


fantasyhoneybabe
Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12

6 posted 2000-06-27 02:46 AM


HI THERE EVERYONE !!!
I'M REALLY THANKFUL FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS , THANKS . WELL I'M SURPPRISED THAT YOU REALLY LIKED IT . WELL IT WILL BE EVEN MORE ROMANTIC IF YOU GUYS IMAGINE IT WITH YOU AND YOUR GIRL / BOYFRIENDS !!!!!!!!!!

FANTASYHONEYBABE
27/6/00

LOVE YAH !!! PEACE !!!

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
7 posted 2000-06-27 03:37 AM


aaaaaahhhhhh yessssss just what we needed.. a ray of light in the darkness!!! wonderful image you have created here!! welcome!!!

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

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