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E. Benjamin Roy
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since 2000-06-18
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0 posted 2000-06-26 01:06 AM



From darkness comes willingness,
From willingness comes want,
From want comes fight,
From fight comes FREEDOM.

Lay not and allow yourself to be taken,
Fight for what you want,
And Freedom shall be yours.

© Copyright 2000 E. Benjamin Roy - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-26 02:43 AM


great words of expression but freedom has always been mine. love it man

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-06-26 08:12 AM


Hmm... very wise words indeed    Only from wanting can freedom be ours. Great work!
LuckyinLove
Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57
Australia
3 posted 2000-06-26 08:41 AM


Freedom, and take no prisoners, he he I have freedom or do I? maybe Im the prisoner, I don't know but I loved your poem.
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