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The End of Days (Some imput please...first post here)
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The End of Days (Some imput please...first post here) |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
(Ok, guys, i am new to this facet of passions. I do more then dable in the darkside of life, i almost find it a comfort...aside from this, i normally post on teenie) The End of Days Something’s wrong, ‘cause the sun’s all black, Dark clouds herald of hell’s bloody track Future’s fate is looking a bit grim For us, the moons are akin The end is here, friends all gathered near, To suckle doom’s crystal tears, All God’s insects burrowed in my ears, Here comes the lie, we’re livin’ in fear Racing through the endless fires, Fearing every solemn, whisper-faded liar, Burning with all the worthless liars, Trying all the mirthless men tires Leaving their faces drier Sitting next to the earth’s final pyre, Knowing the faces of all the liars, You’ll never forget your face, not among all the starless fates Life’s just bleeding and needing The one person you can never have Your love is a stab to me, Deep in my soul This world’s a waste, Everyone is just taking up space, The only way to fix it is to burn it all away, Drown them all in their own greed, Money nothing, love, hate, life is all you need God’s children all gathered near, the end is here An exit to eternal winter wasting, all in tear For the end of days is here ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, that is one dark situation. The poem was great, very clearly told the story. The pain it portrays is very sad. I hope the world is not quite that far gone, though it very well could be. catalinamoon |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
now see, this is how a natural poet rhymes!!! i try soooo hard to rhyme my work like this, but to no avail!! this is wonderful!! you have captured many sign of the time images here. i really liked it!! WELCOME!!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes as my dear friend Kynder said welcome to the DarkSide and guess what i am your father. Just Joking. well love the piece kind of reminds me of the movie end of days. and through the way i think the world is beyond this suffering point and i intend to help it out one line at a time and one mind at a time. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Wow! Thanks for the input guys... Yes i think the world is that far gone. Long ago we cast aside the important things in exchange for the empty promises of money and profit, we have lost sight of what we are here to do...and its not to make money! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~First,...Welcome!!! Second,...I love the writing style that you have. Third,...this definately fits here,...good and dark...Right on!!! Oh,...and a damn shame that this is pretty much heading that way... true. Take care. *Peace. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
I don't know what to say, Your poems are so moving. Even the dark ones express emotions that are so deep we can only begin to imagine what you are feeling. I think it is great that you can find a way to express these feelings through poetry. You definately have a gift. Don't throw it away. Love Always, Shell. |
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