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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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not one of my best.... bear with me please. He tickled me, He made me smothered potatoes. He found the secret mole Above my ear. He stole so we could eat. He listened when no one else would. He knew me better than I ever Dreamt he could. He made me flow like the River Nile. He whispered the sweetest nothings I had ever heard. He played me like an instrument. He had my heart. He memorized my body. He lied as he smiled. He plotted as he talked. He covered his tracks while Massaging my back. He stroked me to sleep Only to sneak out the door To go smoke crack. He is why I am now Ruined for the rest of you. You may ask "Why give him the credit?" Call it weak, Call it cruel, But at least I give credit where Credit is due. *****kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Kynder....you are not "ruined for the rest of us"...He is why you are WITH the rest of us....and we welcome you. There are no mistakes in life...just experiences. Some good, some bad. No one makes mistakes, just decisions, based on all the factors influencing them at that moment. Faced with the knowledge and experience you have now, if you repeated that same decision, THAT would be a mistake. You deserve the credit....welcome home Sweet Lady. You are among friends here. Keep writing. Hardrock |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Kynder WoW,...when I first started reading this it was sounding so sweet and then it took a turn. OUCH. I feel for you. Please don't say that you are ruined....we need to get talking and work on you. hehe. Honestly, right now I feel like I don't know the proper thing to say to this poem except that it is touching my heart....it is making me think about things around me.....shoot, I don't know, but it's effecting me and that right there just means that it's darn good poetry. Got it? hehe. Ok, enough....Take care. *Peace. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kynder, you have been through it, I know, the betrayal of the heart is so cruel. And I do think this is a spectacular poem. Because it conveys the pain very accurately. I don't believe we are ruined, just damaged. And recovery is imminent.. Catalinamoon |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Hi Kynder, I to have been betrayed, and it is taking me a long time to trust anyone, I feel like I have been ruined, because I can't seem to trust anyone, but I am going to be strong it was him not me, thanks for your words on my poem everybody made me feel so welcome, I had a hugh smile on my face when I was reading everybodies comments. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
oh my dear dear friend kynder you tell me every piece is your best cause it comes from your heart now look at you. this is good as all your work. and your not ruined cause i know you great work and sorry i diden't get to call you back i had to go out. Love your boo JayBean I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Kynder - terrific poem! Hmm... I too thought something different when I started reading it... then it took another twist... Obviously a lot of meaning in this... great work  |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Kynder, I guess I could say what you don't want to hear, and I could say what you do want to hear, but I'll say this I love you kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Oh Kynder, You tear at my heart,I wish your I could blow your sadness away.This is yet another great piece by the one and Only KYNDER How the emotions and feelings run through people like us. You My Kyndered spirit. Keep up the good work Bluebrd |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ohhhhh everybody!!! i really needed support on this one, and didn't even know it. thank you thank you thank you!!!!! There but for the grace of God go i. No matter what i say, no matter what the words attempt to convey, i love you all!!! so much, more than i could ever say. forever, kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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