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DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA

0 posted 2000-06-25 05:47 PM


The fairies fly quickly, on the cool nights breeze, coming from all around the seven seas.
The fire burns brightly, while the drums set the beat, this is the most magic night of the year, when all the fairies meet.
They flutter round the tree's, chanting and singing theie songs, talking of the days that've been gone so long.
Deep in the froest's, they all used to be, living in magick and harmony.
An evilness came, they were all damned,
this evilness had a name,
this evilness was man.

© Copyright 2000 Lisa Marie - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-25 07:27 PM


~This holds a very powerful message.  Well done,...wonderful descriptions...again, powerful message. Take care. *Peace.
kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-06-25 07:32 PM


oh boy this is lovely to read.  i really mean it.  i am interpreting the title as an invitation to offer one???  here are a couple  Wicked It Comes     Murder One     Fairy Blood        

i think i am a little too dark for even myself tonite!! yikes!!!! anyhoooo love this!!!

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-06-26 12:47 PM


Fairies Flight, that's what you should name it. not only from man but to the bon fire,
Great pome kid.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-06-26 02:25 AM


great read. i can relate i see man as a virus do you?

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Swåmp¤Faerÿie
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 358
Illinois
5 posted 2000-07-03 03:08 PM


RIGHT ON!! we've (mankind) really messsed up the joy of the earth ....*sigh* excellent poem...

swamp faeryie

And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
6 posted 2000-07-03 06:49 PM


Boy hasn't man done a great job of messing things up!! I thought this was a really good poem, good expressions
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