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Just Having A Little Fun
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Just Having A Little Fun |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Morning starts, but the sun doesn't shine at all, it's hidden by a cloud standing black and tall. No flowers bloom, no birds wish to sing, holding steady to the plants, water droplets cling. You open your eyes and look at the wall, you can feel it in the air, another dreary day in fall. You can hear the dog barking, outside your back door, and hear your sister down the hall, and listen to her snore. Flipping on the radio and hearing your favorite tune, you look up to the clock and see its way past noon. In a hurry your dressed and out the door, walking to your car, your going on an adventure with your best friend to a club called 'The Bar'. You two pull up, a little after ten,wearing your cute, new outfits and ready for fun, you two walk in. So ready to party you two have been all day, then you notice two fine-looking guys, headed your way. You four sit down and talk of things you like to do, and you can easily tell, the blonde one likes you. They offer you drinks, you readliy take and enjoy, you two think there great, but to them you're just a toy. The clock strikes tweleve, now the real party begins, but for you and your friend, the lights start to grow dim. The room starts spinning, going fater round and round, you try to look every where, but your best friend can't be found. --- Laying on your back, you look over to the wall, and you can't seem to remember anything, anything at all. Sitting up you see that blonde guy, with his hand held tight upon your thigh. You throw him off, and then you see,your both stark naked, and so you flee. You get back home, you're still not to sure not went on, all you really know is that your best friends still gone. Her parents call, you say you don't know, but everyone keeps asking,"Where would she go?" Your memory comes back slowly in your dreams, those two boys weren't quite what they seemed. In your drinks they slipped some drugs, and then you four smoked on some nugs. Slowly you stood and fell into the wall, and then there was nothing, nothing at all. You know the truth of what happened to you, but what of your best friend, what are you to do? Dead in a ditch, she now does lie, another teenage overdose is the way she died. All you can do is cry when you think of what has been done, so much for going out and having a little fun. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Welcome to Dark Passions kid. I found this on page 2, with no replies and it's your first post I know I replied to one before from you so this is a late welcome on your first. I enjoyed the message in our poem, if this is true , and so many of us here write true accounts in our lives, then my heart out to you kid. I've had many friends die in my path in life, so much loss. anyway, this is a very powerful message. just one thing if I may, you might try to shorten your writings a bit, or try writing Prose they have a forum for longer stories type?? you know what I mean? not many here has time ?? to read a long one, you won't get as many responses?? as you might like. I know I have done the same thing, I don't mind writing as you can tell. This is given in love kid. just try to get your powerful message across with a powerful short use of words, you have a lot to say, and that's great. I just happen to have big ears. hahaha. ok kid I really do like, but not the pain. again my heart out to you kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Welcome I read your piece last night and didnt know how to reply however this is good It mad me sad.I hope its not real but if it is I am so sorry good work Blue |
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