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amose
New Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 1


0 posted 2000-06-25 03:38 PM


The caring in your eyes,
Your warm, gentle smile,
Your passionate kisses,
The way you look at me,
The way you touch me,
The way you say my name,
The feelings I get when
you hold my hand,
The happiness you bring me,
You make me feel beautiful
inside and out.
I don't want these memonts to end.
I never want to forget them.
I never thought I would
have someone who loves me.
I never thought I would find
such happiness.
I never thought I would  find you.



© Copyright 2000 amose - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-06-25 03:46 PM


Get Hallmark Cards on the phone....I think we have a winner.  Good show Amose.....welcome to Dark Passions.  Really nice work.  Glad you have someone in your life...and shared it with us.   Hardrock
DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
2 posted 2000-06-25 06:07 PM


BEAUTIFUL! Thats all i really need to say.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-06-25 08:52 PM


Welcome to dark passions, what lovely work this is, I too can see it on a card!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


LuckyinLove
Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57
Australia
4 posted 2000-06-25 11:18 PM


Finally I can say I don't relate to someones poem, but it sure is good to know that its just around the corner for me. Thanks for showing me the possitives of love.
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-06-26 01:02 AM


well, maybe tomorrow i will start looking again... you have inspired me!! welcome to passions!!  

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
6 posted 2000-06-26 01:04 AM


Welcome to Dark Passions!   Great first post.  Love can be positive, thanx for reminding me  

Peace

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
7 posted 2000-06-26 02:41 AM


yes yes welcome welcome come one come all to the greatest places on the internet. well great first post i just can't wait to read more i love it. keep them coming.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

8 posted 2000-06-26 06:45 AM


What a beautiful tender poem    WELCOME!

"The happiness you bring me,
You make me feel beautiful
inside and out."

Very touching.  Look forward to reading more of your poetry!

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

9 posted 2000-06-26 02:10 PM


~Aawww,....this is awesome!!!  So glad you found it.  Wonderful heart happy poem. Thank you for making my heart smile.  Welcome here!!! Take care. *Peace.
demoninlove
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211
Dehradun
10 posted 2000-06-26 05:14 PM


Lucid and True - You write from your heart my friend

Deepak Menon


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