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FJiznit Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24 |
Another old one. The end You looked down at me From your pedestal above A weak and broken man Crippled by your love Betrayed by your lies You broke the bond of trust There's nothing left to bind us I'm free now of this lust A toy to play your game Was that all I was to you? You changed the rules to suit yourself You took me for a fool Now I'm lying at your feet You the one who would destroy me Laughing, I hear you laughing Although I know the tears are falling You broke me, but now you're broken too You can't live without me Even you can see it's true Your acts of hate subdue me Bring me closer to my death As I remember acts of love That together we have shared The pain that I'm now feeling Like the pleasure I felt then Can only bring us closer As you bring about our end Hear my cries of anguish As my life slips away Release me of my body Set me free from this rage Soon you will be dying Just like I died for you But your death will be more painful Yes, I've got plans for you Crying, I hear you crying Now you spend your last nights alone Dying, I'll see you dying When I crush your weakened soul Dying at the hands of one you put to death Justice, so poetic You take your final breath You killed me and now I'm killing you You can't live without me Bet you believe me now, don't you? |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Ahhhhhhh you know I love this one! It has so much depth and sadness in it. Talk to ya soon Peace |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Revenge is sweet? but to kill a soul with relish, you will carry that with you to eternity’s end. Great pain you've showed here kid, buy let go of it, it will kill your insides. an old one I hope, and that you have moved on in life. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes this is just another great piece of your work. i hope to keep reading your work so don't ever stop your writing cause you write so wonderful. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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