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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
You don't have a clue of how I live now A lovely dream is slowly turning to a nightmare Leading a pathetic life pitying myself Lying to myself that you still love me,if not only me Lets stop this before it gnaws us both For I can suffer torture but I can't see you caught In between two men knowing not what to do I'll never want our love or friendship to end This I always promise and thats all I can This love's gift I offer you today A promise to be with you always Sincerely A_L |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
such pain...so intense...so intolerable...so necessary |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah... this is a really sincere from-the-heart poem. What a lovely line: "A promise to be with you always" A great poem  |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
a great sacrafice, to give up a love to save a friendship. That my friend, is real hard. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
we'll i've always chose the friend because they seem to be there longer but anyway great wrok can't wait to read more. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~A_L,...oh this poem just grabs at me,...really. It takes strength to do what the speaker has done. Thank you for sharing this piece. Please take care. *Peace. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
very raw, very good. maybe you should let them read this, then they would feel moved to choose....... silly person if ya ask me. i wish just once someone would love me for me. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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