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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Do not speak to me of love It is not love we seek, you and I It is the pleasure, the pain, of owning... And being owned It is in hearing you tell me you belong to me It is in your utter obedience to my needs With no thoughts for yourself And its in your knowing you are my toy To tease to torment to pamper...to ignore Your pleasure comes in pleasing me Your LADY...your ***** GODDESS... your MISTRESS So do not speak to me of love You have yet to prove yourself worthy of me |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
THIS IS TRUE TO THE CORE... Thanks for the read Sincerely A_L |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I guess this is one way to look at it Paula, Oh parden me I mean, Your LADY...your ***** GODDESS... your MISTRESS hahaha A great expression here you got Paula. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Ahhhh Paula.....beat me, hurt me, make me write bad checks. There is something dominant in this poem.....but I enjoyed it. And I really do understand it...had a relationship like that once. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great well seems to be control. love the read and thanks for posting it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
thanks guys....and dont you wonder why only guys have responded? think abt it... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Paula, let me be the first woman to respond. I don't think I have ever had the feeling of being in control that much, usually I am the one on the other side. However, I enjoyed the writing, and especially the line "Do not speak to me of love" Catalinamoon |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
thanks cat...I only have just come into my own in this world and I love it |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Im scarded I will have the same attitude, I will not believe in love until it is proven. I loved it, strong. |
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