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Cycle in Cycle out |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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Cycle In, Cycle Out I’m visited by depression, He’s become my old time friend. He just shows up on my door step, I never know just when. I’ll be really happy, Having a real great day. Then depression comes aknockin’, My blue skies turn to gray. It’s time to run and hide then, To set myself apart. Before depression kicks the door in, And shoves his dagger in my heart. I don’t understand depression, Or what he’s all about, I just know he’s always been there, Cycle in and cycle out. Tomorrow I’m gonna fool him, I’ll hide behind the door. Then strangle that gloomy bastard, And welcome him no more. And when he comes tomorrow, Imagine his suprise. When I jump out of hiding, And look him in the eyes. When filled with love and sunshine, A smile upon my face, I end his ghostly visits, Return him to his place. But today we have to visit, He’ll drag me down, no doubt. He may have cycled in for this day, But tomorrow… he cycles out…….forever. Marv Hardin 06/24/00 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love it, as usual. Cycle in and cycle out. Happiness does the same thing.. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Love this one. How true it is! You really do capture things well  |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God, Hr. do you now how much we write?? we could be the same person, as some might think. hahahaha just to post our poems. hahhaa hahaha haha Anyway I got your E, and replyed. Oh yea, this is great, in and out, I'd like to strangle him to, Hmmm if I hold him and you just hit him, then we both can tackel he's back side. hahaha... Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great work here as always love the play of the words and i think all things do this at times in there own way. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well good grief!! You must be my neighbor cause he is always knocking on my door too. Let me know how if hiding is the key?? Great poem! I loved it!!! Peace |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
That was such a positive way to look at everyday depressions, I am tring to be positive about all the good things I have in my life I have no Lover but my name is LuckyinLove, do you think that will work |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
To LuckyinLove....sure that will work, but the positive attitude will be your most attractive asset. Thanks for asking. To JJ...thanks guy. You are so supportive of everyone in the forum...always lots of encouragement. Looking forward to more of your young perspective on life. To Joel...yeah buddy...stand back while I open this big can of WhupA**...Today is the day....no more depression. I woke up to find LuckyinLove....lots of positive mental energy there. Thanks to all. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
too bad tomorrow isn't guaranteed, eh, rock?? i smell ........ what you are cooking, anyway!! hahaha no i don't watch that crap!! anyway, i see it like this... since no telling if i will breathe tomorrow, why let him win today? then i would die a loser. i was enough of that in life, i refuse to lose in death. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
No place to vote on this one??? Excellent way to express something, Cycle In, Cycle Out, very catchy...AND love the confrontation with depression. Hardrock, I marvel at your work!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
That's right. Trick him, the evil fiend!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...I think a good positive attitude such as you display is very important to see the brighter side of life. James |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
HR, Nicely done my friend. Depression.... A part of life we deal with more than we should. We all look forward to slaming that door. Very good... PS, If you havent already, post to the challange to all DP Poets... It will be a nice thing if we all post our thoughts there"togther". I can`t wait too see the finished product... LarBear |
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