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AVANTI
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

0 posted 2000-06-24 04:49 AM

I must believe...

The laughs on me I know this time

For I was warned all along the way

And that’s not what hurts the most

But I lost a little hope on the way

And there’s no one to remind me

So I keep telling myself over again

For what good I would be if I didn’t

I must believe...for I have loved you

So now and again if someone is laughing

At this issue which is otherwise ludicrous

It doesn’t matter now who did right

I feel the laugh as pangs in my heart

Second to none I felt for you, so long

And I don’t want to be the one

To tell “you how could you again?”

So I’ll wait for you to catch the glimpse

And tell myself that I must believe

Till someday you’ll long to hear me sing

I’ll have washed all my tears dry

I will go on, I ‘ve looked back too long

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2000-06-24 05:27 AM

Good to see you back Avanti and with such a lovely verse.

AVANTI
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

2 posted 2000-06-24 07:30 AM

thanx munda...
(((((((hug))))))
for always reading and encouraging me...

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

3 posted 2000-06-24 08:25 AM

oh!what a beatiful piece
Avanti I know all these feelings.
they are hitting to close to home for me here
I feel as if I might cry.
Beautiful work.
Bluebrdy

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-06-24 09:17 AM

Yes Avanti, it's great to have you back, sigh.
hahahaa hahah hahaa
and you started back with a great poem.
in this poem your talking to your self a lot in my lonelyness god I've started to talk to myself a lot, now people are starting to look at me. hahaha hahaha hahaha.
well nothing new for me. haha
Anyway great to have you stop within your travels.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-06-25 02:05 AM

i have never read any of your work before this but this one makes me want to read more of it. so keep them coming and i'll keep replieing

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

AVANTI
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

6 posted 2000-06-28 12:58 PM

thanx all of you for reading sorry i was away on voices of web of a while so i've beena little sloppy but I appreciate the encouragement

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

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