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you cut off my pigtails |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
I never quite woke up from your heartache the little girl under my skin is dead |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hi, Jennie. Hope you got my email.  |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Oh Jennie I hope the little girl isn,t dead I hope she's just hiding. good poem Blue |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I enjoyed this expression I hate the pain. The little one in all of us sometimes go's away, but still remains hidden untill we really need them again. It's true, but we must search for them. I wish it were as easy to push a search button like Yahoo, and say find my little self, but it's not, we must do the search. Love, light. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i hope the little girl's not dead i would like to meet her. great piece and hey i'm falling in love with your work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
Why, thank you! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
The little girl under your skin is not dead sweetie, she's just has'nt woke up yet 'cause she is still tired from all she's been through. When she wakes up though, look out! 'Cause she's gonna be ready to go! lol Great writing, very touching.Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Don't you fret my little one, About the hair you lack. With nurturing by Dark Passions, Your pigtails will grow back. Loved it Jennie......Hardrock. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Its hard sometimes to "heal the child within" but time will heal and you will feel alive again, nicely expressed |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Jennie May,...your poem is short and precise. Well put and sooo touching. I like this style you used. Take care of you. *Peace. |
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