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Some say love is blind.
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Some say love is blind. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Some say love is blind. That didn’t happen to me I know that forever and a day I will find my love for you within has made me see The silky pastels of a sunset in the summer skies. The magical flickering of the southern fireflies. The misty yet clear puzzling love within your eyes. This is what I love. A bright moon beam streaming through the trees. Waves gently rocking to a summer breeze. The look you gave to my insentient pleas. This is what I love. A short time a go life was so lonesome and my heart was cold Then you came along with your kiss as fresh as spring turning all I sought to gold. A wolf crying his serenade in the night A wing from a dove caught in mid flight Your Satiny voice whispering Joel I love you. This is what I love You...... are what I love. To W. D. all my love. Joel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well joel heres another great piece of work from you and as always good luck with your white dove. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very romantic... good work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Great Job Joel Your work is always so great. You have just explained to me what my love tells me. White Dove is very lucky. Not everyone in the world actually finds pure true love. I wish everyone could though. again another great piece Blue |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yea I had to lighten up a bit, hell I was getting to dark for myself. hahahahahah haha I know that we just dig ourself a hole, and climb right in, I've climed out for now. thanks again one and all. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
As they say in the plumbing business: The air is always fresher at the top of the hole. But then, you only need to know three things to be a plumber: S*** flows downhill, the boss is an S.O.B., and payday is Friday. Glad you refound your "plumb" and your "plum". Enjoyed it Big Guy....Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Ahhhhhhhhhh Joel so beautiful. It is always nice to write these love poems once in awhile. Huh??? What am I saying..... I have no one to write one for!!  Okay someone find me a DATE!!!!!  lolPeace Joel and once again great work!!! Dark |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Hr. yes it does, the down hill part. and yes it smells better on top of the hole and thanks. Dkw. thank you and yes it does, I had been getting myself down to much, I can see it in everything I do, so I've decided to climb out of that hole. And if I wasn't tied up with W. D. I'd ask you out to that date. hahah Do you go for old broken men?? hahaha Really kid with your feelings and so a large heart ?? you should have no trouble.?? Have fun on that date. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Yeah Joel,...it's about time you lightened things up...haha. Just kidding. This is so beautiful and touching...I think it's perfect. Now see,...your work,...this is what I love. hehe. *Peace. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Thanks Spit, haha I do have me up's and down's. and you have known them both. haha love ya. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
whoever W.D. is must fell very lucky to have a person who is so romantic with them!!!! why can't i ever meat a person like that?? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
See dear Joel, even you can chase rainbows! LOL This was a nice change from the dark blood and guts of recent posts. We all have the light within it's nice to let it shine sometimes I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
Hi Joel, I had that kind of love for someone once I just wish I felt it back. But there have been a few that have had it for me, I only realised how good they were after I learnt my lesson. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Beautiful poem Joel...very romantic and pure. Reminds me of my loss....I hope this works out for you...and if not...you can join my club. lol...oy vey...but I doubt you need to worry about that. What you've got is strong and true...it'll last. Take care! D.E. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ "So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler *+Daughter of Darkness+* |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
thank you KJLI, you have My name is Joel, but I'm taken. hahaha, my heart belongs to W. D. (White Dove) My one and only love for life. The reason I breath. and my next heart beat. yes my cyber daughter, you are right, the light is nice, crud!. haha haha hahaa hahaha Thanks D.E. I'll try to make this last with all my heart. Thank you Luckin-love, yes, I did a poem not long ago ?? it was ?? "You"ll Never know what you lost, Untill. you can click on the title to go see it, that covers what your saying it had an unbelievable 30?? something hits. anyway thank you for your time I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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