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The Glock

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Hardrock
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0 posted 06-23-2000 09:34 PM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Hardrock

Sitting in silent darkness
            smoke curling from my cigarette
                         the glow of ash reflecting off the rain flecked window panes.

Wanting to wonder, not wanting to know
            
And as I sit there wondering,
And stare at the silent clock.
I jack  another bullet,
Into the chamber of my Glock.

What now…….what now my love?

© Copyright 2000 Marv Hardin - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone


1 posted 06-23-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Oh, so powerful, and kind of scary. Be careful with that thing, ok?
Joel the wolf
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Angels Camp


2 posted 06-24-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

yes baby now what. hahahaha
love it. but hell guy is it for her or you.?

HHHHOOOOOWWWWWLLLLLLLing Great.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
Jeremiah Johnson
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3 posted 06-24-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

great work here to as always. kind of a different format HEHEHE I wonder? we'll any like the idea and its just another great poem from you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Hardrock
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4 posted 06-24-2000 01:58 AM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

That was the whole idea behind the poem Joel.....you never really know who it's for.

JJ.....yeah, kind of a different format for me.  I used to write free-form years ago, but stopped.  The forum inspired me to try again......this is my first in about 20 years.

Thank you both...and to all of you for your encouragement and support.
bluebrdy65
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Gladys,


5 posted 06-24-2000 08:44 AM       View Profile for bluebrdy65   Email bluebrdy65   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bluebrdy65

Great Job Hardrock
I have rubbed my husbands glock.
and have thought about using on me
but never on him.
I dont know who was going to get here
but your poem was great
And dont worry I would never have the guts to use it Im scared of guns
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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


6 posted 06-24-2000 09:31 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Intense, very!

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

Debbie Lindsey
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7 posted 02-20-2002 10:20 PM       View Profile for Debbie Lindsey   Email Debbie Lindsey   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Debbie Lindsey

Oh Marvin!  How well I know that Glock!  
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