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FJiznit
Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24


0 posted 2000-06-23 04:26 PM


I hold your hand
A tear I cry
Said I'd pray for you
But I lied
For you now death is swift
From me to you a priceless gift

The gift of death I give to you
A token of a love so true
The gift of death so cold and clean
A comfort in your misery

Another love is laid to rest
One more step on my timeless quest
I take the lives of those I love
I fear not the wrath of God above

Die my love
I have waited so long
Don't cry my love
I'll remember you
When you're gone

It's too late for you now
How could you love me?
My murderous intentions were plain to see
Blinded by love
Entrapped by my hate
In seducing my heart
You were sealing your fate

The gift of death I give to you
Torment you with a pain so cruel
The gift of death now yours to keep
Alone now in eternal sleep

© Copyright 2000 Nick Barker - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-23 04:34 PM


great work as always another piece from you i love to read. good job here as always. keep this wonderfull stuff up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-06-24 12:44 PM


Whoaaaaaaaaaaa my Freind!!!  Sometimes ya freak me out     Great work tho.....:P


Peace

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
3 posted 2000-06-25 06:33 PM


i do believe i need to start reading more of your works.  what an exquisite flow you have.  i hope that you realize that when you die, you will have to answer for your actions.  would you be able to explain why you lied??

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

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