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Loving the Wrong Man |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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It's so easy, loving the wrong man. He leads you into that special place where you feel alive. His elusiveness makes you needy. His charisma makes you smile. His sensuality ignites the spark of passion long since gone. It's so easy, loving the wrong man. When he offers you a branch to cling to, when he prevents you from drowning, when his words are all you have. It's so easy loving the wrong man, that it almost makes it right... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is the first I've read of yours and I love it. Why? Because it relates to me, yes, and what I' going through but more than that. It speaks in heart language that we can all understand and that is much needed. this one goes in my library welcome to the forum by the way! Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kathleen, thank you. I know most women will understand this one.. |
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gothicmoth Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 89 |
Yes, but what's sad is when you do it three different times. Oh well. This was a nicely done poem. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
From a man's perspective.....it hurts just as much when she discovers you are the wrong man....and you haven't. She leaves, you grieve....Hurt is a two way street. Dark Passions is an expressway to the soul. Excellent work...enjoyed it very much. Hardrock |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Loving the wrong man? Well I have done that too, what is it that draws us to them??? Are they bad? Dangerous? Exciting? What ever it is it is wonderful for a while then reality sets in... Still when you look back some of the dance will always be remembered as wild and thrilling. Know what you mean hon!! Great work.. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh boy........ now you are the one hitting the nail on the head!!!!!!!! i recall a comment you made on a poem of mine a few days ago kinda on the same lines!!!! thank you for this one!! i needed to know i am not the only one who has been trapped and snared, and didn't dare care, until such time it becomes painfully aware. lovin your work, girl!! keep it up!! A woman to a man is But a mere chapter, But a man to a woman Is an entire book.-- Kynder Howell |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i find myself here at this same road to thanks for the piece of everchangeing ideas it kind of help me get a little of my head together thanks. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Catalinamoon, God I hate being the wrong man, I guess I was at one time. Maybe now, we'll see. love the poem kid. hate the hurt. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can relate to this having been the wrong man in many a womans life...who just happened to be involved with the wrong woman...still it is a learning experience...and sometimes lots of fun but always pain in the end....excellent thoughts from you on this subject....James |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
I know all about loving the wrong man. You really captured the essence of the pain and longing in your imagery. As always...beautful writing Elise |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... yeah, great expression Sandra  Isis is correct though... but afterwards it can be oh so sad.  ~ Tara ~ soul dying... heart crying. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh yes... Sandra, once again you've hit the spot. So true, I'm with you on this! Take Care! |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I swear it is some kind of starnge coincidence that we date the SAME men...lol. You speak the truth so well, I can only hope that I will start loving myself more in hopes that one day I will meet a man who can give me all of that, without wearing a mask, so to speak. This is beautiful! ....beth "I mean that loving you is strange and adored by me throughout..oh no it's you again, blessing you with every kiss..." |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I think you are right....most women WILL know how this feel. Deception burns does it not? I suppose though - that men love the wrong women too...to be fair. Sigh...oh for happy endings hey? Good write Sandra... K |
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