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Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2000-06-22 07:36 PM


ANGEL

It`s bedtime now
You have survived
But bruised and beaten
You lay in bed
You`ve taken your punches
One more time, one more day

So rest now angel
Dream sweet dreams
'Cause tomorrow knows another way
To break you down, blow you away

But don`t be afraid
I`ll be there
To hold your hand and walk with you
And if we fall, don`t let go
We`ll both give in and let them win

So rest now angel
Dream away
Dream about your final day
Then all your wounds won`t hurt no more
And mockery don`t mean a thing

Life`s a game we cannot win
We beg forgiveness for our sin
And soon will see the last cruel day
Then all bright birds will fly away

So rest now angel, get some sleep
Tomorrow you`ll cry your final weep
You and me will always be
We`ll walk together endlessly...


[This message has been edited by Broken (edited 06-22-2000).]

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EagleOne
Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2000-06-22 10:45 PM


"Life`s a game we cannot win"

If you go into any game thinking you can't win, you have already lost!



God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



bluebrdy65
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 276
Gladys,
2 posted 2000-06-22 11:14 PM


this one is a little sad for me I have a friend with the nickname angel and I could see her in your poem as if you knew her
Great Job
Blue

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-23 01:01 AM


you are so right we can't win in life because we all die but thats not what matters its what we do in life that counts.
great work here. thanks for posting.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-06-23 04:44 AM


I just don't know what to say, this is ?? so sad, I hate days I lose to, there is so much out in this world that is good, and on bad days we just pass it up, and have given up one day at a time.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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