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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2000-06-22 11:07 AM


CHAINS:

I wonder then, I wonder how
My past at work, my past here now
Twice as many, tombs of gold
Past the relics, names of old

To my side comes one in chains
From my heart, gone, remains
Where and when am I to be
Fondly tests insanity

One by one they all retreat
Facing giants they can't defeat
Is it not an ancient curse
This ritual pain we all rehearse

Take my hand, lift me up
Take this thorn, this crown, this cup
I am here with work to do
My job, my life, to die for you.

By Sylvia


© Copyright 2000 Sylvia Greybe - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-06-22 11:21 AM


an in depth virsion of giving one's self all.
great, I really liked this one syliva

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-06-22 04:46 PM


Perfect....just absolutely perfect.  I bow to you and your perfection.  Loved it.....Hardrock.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-06-22 04:58 PM


Sylvia, this is exquisite! I love it.  
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