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since 2000-04-01
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0 posted 2000-06-22 02:53 AM


Death comes to us all
for some of us sooner than expected,
many die in pain, many die unaware,
many of us want to live our life forever,
It is a choice that will not be granted,
immorality would be the destruction of one's self,
death comes to put a stop to our demands, to our unlimited wants,
to preserve our mother earth,
Humans must become extinct,
We are the sole destroyers of earth,
We destroy animals and plants, even each other,
How could god make such mistake by giving us the ability to think?
Death comes when it is least expected,
Earth is like a child to us, that is innocent enough to let us live,
We wreak havoc and vengeance on her,
to destroy it to a state where earth can no longer recognize herself,
each of us brings earth closer to her death from the day we set foot on her,
each of us kills a part of earth before we face death,
Death for us means a little more time left for earth to live,
Death is the cycle that needs to be completed,
in order for new life to sprout,
Death should be welcome with open arms,
each of us is moving on to destroy some other place,
We are moving to a new place,
a new time untouched.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-22 03:08 AM


oh man we should be friends and i'm asking you please email me really soon cause you think the same way i do humans are a virus we kill and kill but never take the time to htink about what were doing or even relace some of what we destroy. oh yes we need to talk.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-06-22 09:16 AM


It sometimes this way to me also. Animals kill only to survive. Man kills for so many reasons....and to kill the place we live is horrible. good poem.
Nancee
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 45
Australia
3 posted 2000-06-23 02:05 AM


I agree.
We are ignorant rapists.
Goosebumps of contempt flooded me as I read.

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-06-23 10:42 AM


This one is so true kid.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 2000-06-23 03:41 PM


There is a balance in nature for all things....except man.  Man must be his own predator.  Hence, war.  But nature will rise up against man one day....and then the cleansing begins.   Enjoyed it......Hardrock
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