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0 posted 2000-06-22 02:49 AM


Why do I bring pain, to the ones I love?
Why do I leave the ones I care?
Why do I have to sacrifice my life, just so I can make someone happy?
Why bad things happen to the people, I care,
Why can't I be a drunk and die slowly,
Why do I have to die with a pride?
Why do I have to have a future?
Why do I need love?
Why do I need to tell truth?
Why do I need to help others?
Does this make me a good person?
Does this choices symbolize a good person to the rest of the world?
Why do I always have to give something to the world, to benefit from it?
Why should not I be selfish?
Why cannot I hurt someone?
Do morals and rules run my life?
Do I run my life?
I do not know who I am,
I am here, for better or worse,
Who decides what I am going to be?
I am not my own person, I never was, and I never will be,
Everything and anything I do is not my choice,
I do not decide to die & I do not decide to live,
I do not decide to hate & I do not decide to love,
I do not decide to think & I do not decide to choose,
I did not even decided to write this poem,
What makes me, who I am?
Is this the question no one knows the answer too?
Being popular does not make me loved by others,
I do not know who I am, what I am, why I am here, where I am going,
All I know is nothing,
Knowing nothing, has taught me a lot,
There is no limit to what I can do,
The only limit is what I can comprehend.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
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Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-22 03:04 AM


i like all the unsureness here and all the questions you ask truely good work Bravo..

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-06-22 10:37 AM


This looks into the heart of why we do what we do, an who we are, great, we all have ask these questions of ourselves.
great to see it in print.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-06-22 05:51 PM


Welcome to the real world Xeonox....when you find the answers, come back and share with us who are still looking.  Good to see them in print....makes me think.  Hardrock
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