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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Wherever Poems on napkins verse on my shirttail flattened paper cups the back of unopened mail killer stuff in the palm of my hand grab a stick and write it in the sand pull out the clippers and shave it on the dog get that flashlight and trace it in the fog put it down somewhere even if the hour`s late hehe, i wrote this on a paper plate. Nameless One  |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
i can't even tell you how many times i've written somthing down on whatever i could find!! this is perfect for doing just that  |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is true and its a good piece. let me think oh yes i worse i think i've done was writing a poem on my wall in paint about dragons cause i was out of paper. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
so true, nameless, so true. thanks for posting. been a while. good one!! flow goes right thru!! kynder A woman to a man is But a mere chapter, But a man to a woman Is an entire book.-- Kynder Howell |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Someone did a poem almost exactly like this about a month ago, on what we write on. I loved poetry so much as I drove truck I'd try to write,, ahhaha not good I know, so I picked up a small hand held recorder, it's great. love the idea of this poem, thanks kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, thats just how it is for me too. Jump up in the middle of the night to write a thought down, looking for a scrap, looking for a pen. Very enjoyable.. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Nameless One,...I love this. Haha. I have written on the back of unopened mail....sooo many times. Uuum,....on the back of receipts,...on my legs,..haha..uuummm,....on a small piece of scrap wood once,...on a big leaf in Costa Rica...love this poem....haha Thanks. *Peace. |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Isn't it wonderful how beautiful phrases just pop into your head and you wirte them somewhere until you find a way to use them. i always think of awesome things and then forget to write them down....that's why my poetry is so bad. lol. oh well. But this was quite wonderful. i really liked it,esp. tracing it in the fog. that's very.....dreamy. lol swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I think I've written everywhere but on my dog! ha.ha. Joy |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Nameless One....I had to laugh. It's me, it's me. I have sticky notes, receipts, the bathroom wall (hey, it's my house), and like Joel, a tape recorder I carry with me at all times.....plus my answering machine, voice mail, magazines. I've written on just about everything....especially bar napkins in my younger days. I've given away as much poetry as I've ever published. Great work that speaks to us all here. Hardrock |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
This made me chuckle. I love the last line. I wish I had that kind of abandon but I'm pretty retentive about my writing. I found this very refreshing. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hey I really loved this....I thought it was cool!! It is a funny poem!! Good poetry doesn't just have to be written on paper, LOL!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Can't help but like this one! Keep that paper plate it may be a collectable when your rich and famous!! LOL This should be in the book. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Holy Moses thats the most replies i`ve ever gotten ,thank you one and all for your kind words, i don`t get to frequent this forum much anymore or my comp for that matter ,so it`s good to see some familiar folks and new ones too. Nameless One Grins... |
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