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Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 358
Illinois

0 posted 2000-06-21 09:59 PM

What's the point of asking questions,
when no one has the time to answer??¿
In today's society,
the habit is growing like cancer.

Watch the people look at you with hate.
pushing & sighing as they impatiently wait.

Oh my,but we have gotten rude so quick.
Like a slight of the hand,
quicker that the eye,
magic trick.

What a shame it is.

And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 358
Illinois

1 posted 2000-06-21 10:02 PM

Hey everyone!! Sorry i haven't been replying to all your great poems!! i was gone for 4 days awhile back,imagine my suprise when i come home to a DARK PASSIONS #2!! And a hundred poems to catch up on reading....LOL..so,i apologize but i'm reading as many as i can each day!!

swamp

And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-06-21 10:20 PM

Pretty scary! Turn your back for a second and the place grows like a weed!!

Love your poem...you should go to the alley forum and read some stuff there about rude customer service!!!

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-22 01:03 AM

i do agree with every word in your poem people turn away from one another and the truth about life and what it means like no ones willing to give you a hand anymore. nice piece loved it.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-06-22 02:16 AM

Yes Swamp~, it's great to have you back.
and a great poem to come in with.
yes I did the same thing only I left for two days.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-06-22 01:14 PM

~Swamp,...welcome back babe. hehe. This is so true....a long time ago I wrote a poem about something similar...about being on a bus and counting the stops left to my stop...as to run in the house and escape society's hatred. Made me think of that....and so,...I enjoyed reading this as I feel very much so the same way. And it IS a shame. Thanks for posting it. *Peace.

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

6 posted 2000-06-22 05:46 PM

Great capture of the Wal-Mart mentality....excellent. Hardrock

Swåmp¤Faerÿie
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 358
Illinois

7 posted 2000-06-23 05:38 PM

Thanks everyone =] I wrote this in my hotel room a little disappointed because of the condition of the world. as i always i am. LOL...grr.. well thanks anyway.

swamp

And there she weaves by night and day,
a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson

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