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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-06-21 04:59 PM


I see anger fly between man and woman
And my own fear climbs its trellis
Inside.
Does she have that one lump in
Her throat?
Does she hope he doesn't get that one look
In his eye, like I used to?
I am trying SO HARD
To believe good exists in
More than not.
Always hearing don't worry
There are good ones out there
Yeah surrrrrreeeeee there are...
They are just locked up, married
Or gay.
Don't  'spect one will come my way
In time to save me from
Hell today.
Tomorrow is but a promise,
So should He take me in His night,
My fears will be proven right.
I shall die unloved
Uncherished,
Unknown.
Simply me.....
Just full of pain.


*****kynder< !signature-->

A woman to a man is
But a mere chapter,
But a man to a woman
Is an entire book.--
Kynder Howell




[This message has been edited by kynder (edited 06-21-2000).]

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Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-06-21 05:07 PM


Kynder..Why do I read your poems and have this overwhelming urge to just hold you?  Your words reach inside me...and I find myself hating all the men who ever hurt you.  Damn them!  Hardrock
Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
2 posted 2000-06-21 05:11 PM


Wow, I've never heard it put in words,but I've felt it before.....I hope not uncherished.   Well put!
    Thanx!

Click

catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-06-21 08:27 PM


Oh boy, you said it! In particular, they are all married....Great expression of that unappreciated feeling. Why don't they love us better??
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-06-21 11:08 PM


You know I could say a lot of things you have already heard but for now, I'll tell you of an old couple that I chased down to ask them how they had been in love for so long, you see I saw them in the restaurant sitting close and they had a lot of room, her head wasn't even above the back board and his was as bald as an eagle.
And so old it didn't seem possible, and when they walked out to the car he held her hand, hell I just had to ask them. They said communication was the trick every night, even if they disagreed they kissed every night and said I love you.
yes Kynder love is alive and out there, but you must love yourself first. Not saying you don't it was something I had to do after a 20 year marriage down the drain. I'm going to win my fight!!! you know what that is.
Anyway. you have a lot of friends here at passions and some men to boot.
I just hope I can be one of them.??

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-06-22 12:00 PM


hmmmmm maybe i should edit my poem and say every man but a dark passionate one!! hee hee!!  i love everyone for their comments.  and yes joel, you are right, self love is the key.  thank God it didn't take me 20 years!! just 7!!!! never married tho!!! kinda ruined me for it, but i still have hope.  sometimes!!!!!!!!        and boy it feels great to have friends!!!!!!!!!! and i know beyond a shadow of a doubt that it is TRUE friends i have here.  love to all.

kynder

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
6 posted 2000-06-22 01:16 AM


Kynder just so you know i'll always be true to you and if i diden't have a love at the time or at least Until i move which i hope to never happen i'd would be there for you to cry on
           With and feelings for
             you your friend
               LOVE JJ< !signature-->

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-



[This message has been edited by Jeremiah Johnson (edited 06-23-2000).]

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

7 posted 2000-06-22 09:48 AM


~Kynder,...*Sigh*,..glad that I caught this after you commented to some of the replies...just to know that you have some bit of hope and do know what Joel said about self love is true.  It puts you up somewhere I thought I had to pull you to...ok, that may make no sense, but what I am trying to say is that,..your poem is heartfelt and sort of has this little lack of hope going on at the end...which made me kinda sad...so I was thinking I would send you some of my chatter to try and make you see some sunshine and to let you now of all that's out there...but it seems you have a grip on yourself...and this.  ANYWAY....haha...I my friend am here for you.  I think we should talk sometime....seems there's a bit we have in common.  Thank you for sharing this bit of you and please excuse my rambling...it's all straight from the heart though...no fake or coated words from this mouth. Please take care. *Peace.
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
8 posted 2000-06-22 02:35 PM


oh dear dear flame of saliva,  you never cease to amaze me.  so much s**t you go thru yourself, and yet soooo willing to help me thru mine!!  i could go into a rambling myself about the importance of self, and the grasp i try to keep on the reality of it all, but i will email ya instead!!!!!!!! lol!!  love ya girl!!!!
ciao

kynder

A woman to a man is
But a mere chapter,
But a man to a woman
Is an entire book.--
Kynder Howell

hunter
Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 22
lex,ky
9 posted 2000-06-22 05:07 PM


i just wanted to let you know that i am also there to be your friend in need ,i have an ear to listen with and a shoulder to cry on and lots of patience to help another with.light and love be with you.hunter
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