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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-21 02:50 PM


     I just came through This
        Gate way into Hell
               And
         Apon Entering I
              Heard
         The holy Bells
              Ring
        And joyous Songs
              Sing
So what kind of hell do i have to Face
             Is Hell
   All the things among the Human
              Race
        I loved to Hate
      Or is there no Hell
     Just a heavenly Gate?


I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
1 posted 2000-06-21 04:26 PM


exceptional. thought provoking. profound.  jj, i love your work.  and i will not wax spiritual on ya, but God will show you what you seek to know.  He made it all, good or bad, dark or light, hellacious or heavenly.

kynder

The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-06-21 08:20 PM


yes my friend, you do have a way about you.
I've enjoyed your thoughts.
and this one, I also won't wax (as Kynder said)spirital stuff on ya ether. just that she is right.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-22 12:47 PM


i thank you both for your repiles and i know what you mean and it was not ment like that. it was just a drop in my heart at the time and a question i had.< !signature-->

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-



[This message has been edited by Jeremiah Johnson (edited 06-23-2000).]

Shannon Wanstreet
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since 2000-12-12
Posts 1

4 posted 2000-12-13 12:58 PM


HEY JJ JUST STOPPED IN TO SAY HELLO I LOVE THIS POEM IT SAYS SO MUCH AND BELIEVE IT OR NOT IT HAS A GREAT POINT WELL IVE NOW JOINED AND I MIGHT PUT SOME OF MY POEMS ON HERE BUT THEN AGAIN I MIGHT NOT THE MAIN PURPOSE WAS SO I COULD REPLY TO YOUR POEMS......WELL I NEED TO TALK TO YOU SO E~MAIL ME A.S.A.P
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